Tilly the Tui

Tilly the Tui

By Holli 26.6.19

Tilly Tui flew over New zealand. After one week of flying Tilly grew tired. Luckily, Tilly found a nice big Pohutukawa tree to rest up and revive her energy. Once again, Tilly took to the sky on her journey. She had arrived. She lowered her beak, gulped up a long juicy worm, and fell asleep.



Our learning intention was to include all of the following sentence styles.

Simple Sentence: A simple sentence must have a subject/noun and an adjective. Plus in between 5-12 words.
Very Short Sentence: This sentence is to grab the reader's attention. This sentence must have 5 or less words.
 Power sentences: This sentence is used to get straight to the point with no nonsense and word count is 12 or less.

Red, White, and Blue: You can use multiple ideas in this sentence by adding commas but don't forget on your last idea do a comma then put and after the comma.

The Adverb Start: This sentence is pretty straight forward cause you just start a sentence with an adverb but remember in between your adverb and your sentence there must be a comma.

Begin with a Preposition: They are words that are a time or a place. Prepositions are quite useful.